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Saturday, December 16, 2006

A Thrilling Car Ride

Some time ago, I took my friend's car from my home to school. When I got into the car, I started to quarrel with my friend because of his being late. And then his car rushed forward like a crazy ox. Regardless of the walkers on the roadside, he drove as fast as he could. He even ran through several red lights. Suddenly, our car screeched to a halt just in front of a big truck when we came to a crossroad. Undoubtedly, it scared me to death, and from then on, I have never complained anything to him whenever I am in his car.

1 Comments:

At 6:40 AM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

What a short-tempered friend!

Your one-paragraph writing reads well. Why not expand it into a fully developed essay?



Some time ago, I took my friend's car from my home to school.
-->alternatively:my firend gave me a ride...

 

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