My Appearance and Inherent Discribition
(A) My name is Eve Lee. I'm a young woman of average height and weight. I have long curly hair, but I always get my hair in a ponytail. I have black eyes. I wear contact lens and sometimes wear glasses. Recently I always wear a gold necklace, one earring on my right ear, and a ring and watch on my right hand. Today I am wearing a brown hooded sweater, dark blue jeans, and dark-red shoes.
(B) I am a careless person. Although I always tell myself, “Remember it! It's very important,” at last I always forget them. For example, last Wednesday I had to drive to work and take my nephews and nieces (two cute boys and a sweet girl) home. When arriving at the child-centre, I found that I forget to bring their book-bags. Undoubtedly, I drove back home to take them. To tell the truth, I always forget something and my mother says it to me from time to time, “You are always oblivious to anything.”

1 Comments:
a brown hood sweat
-->a brown hooded sweater
Although I always tell myself, “Remember it! It's very important,” but at last I always forget them.
-->Although/but -->use just one of them in one sentence
I was used to drive car to work and take my nephews
-->I had to drive to work and take....
I forget bring their book-bags.
-->I forgot to bring...
my nephews ->my nephews and nieces
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